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    9 seconds haikus at odd intervals (work in progress) 

    Writing down a few words in the form of haikus when stopping for a 9 seconds break


    2009.12.08.  


    12h15

    I am looking outside
    At strangers in the subway
    You seeing active

    I am looking inside
    At a blond woman writing
    Being seeing me

    12h35

    Late for 9 seconds
    Counting on my fingers
    Memorizing  it

    12h50

    And late again late
    Unconscious once more again
    Waking up at last

    13h07

    Missed again oh yes
    Just like me to worry so
    Doing it just right

    13h25

    Better let it go
    Am I late or too early?
    Laughing at myself

    13h35

    I missed one more time
    It's all I can think about
    That I do blank out


    13h43

    On the watch this time
    To catch the exact moment
    Tense as a wild cat

    13h47

    So I miss again
    Here in Vasco da Gama
    My favorite place

    13h50

    On the watch once more
    To catch 9 seconds at two
    And right on the spot

    13h51

    Waiting waiting still
    As I add a cloud of milk
    To my Earl Gray Tea

    13h55

    Five minutes to two
    But will I make it?
    Looking at Peel Street

    13h56

    And peeling layers
    Of thoughts and cares
    As I count silly syllables

    13h57

    Still this is a miracle
    Wondering what might happen
    Fado music on


    14h00

    Hearing listening 
    At the portuguese lyrics
    At exactly two

    14h02

    Caught the sound oi
    Which in Japan does mean yes
    Saying yes we can

    14h04

    Did it! Yes it worked
    For almost 10 minutes
    Now there is a break

    14h08

    Asking for more milk
    Another cloud is needed
    I hear them talking


    14h10

    Which is which, Spanish?
    With a Portuguese accent?
    No, I can't decide

    14h14

    This will be the last
    For now at least it will be
    I have to go back

    16h00

    I'm walking downtown
    Montreal is dark at four
    With bright Christmas lights

    19h30

    Grilled fennel and cod
    Eating out with my best friend
    Moved by the movie

    2009.12.09. 


    08.44

    Snowstorm in RL
    Floating as in a white cloud
    Without my glasses

    11h59

    A guardian shares
    Clairaudience of a gecko
    Ethereal song

    I feel the goosebumps
    As the madrigal goes on
    About superchords

    13h40

    Strange how one forgets
    How it feels to walk in blizzard
    Blinded by the snow

    Winter wonderland
    Being aware of being
    On icy sidewalks

    13h45

    To bring a kleenex
    From now on when going out
    On my to-do list

    One is not willing
    To use her pink kashmir shawl
    As an handkerchief

    13h47

    Mount-Royal station
    Healthy cheeks for everyone
    Winter has arrived

    14h05

    The subway breaks down
    On my way to my meeting
    I'm bound to be late

    Do not worry child
    You are not a child, are you?
    Just take it lightly

    Do take a deep breath
    Write down a couple haikus
    Be still and quiet

    The gecko comes back
    He's nagging from the nagual
    What is his lesson?

    15h40

    A burly man sings
    Loud to himself on Guy street
    A midnight mass song

    I catch a few words
    Il sait porter sa croix
    It carries deep meaning


    later

    A green-eyed woman
    Pretty as an avatar
    Riding the subway

    much later

    Something has shifted
    Seems the pestering gecko
    Was someone in pain

     

    2009.12.09.

    Shoveling snow
    Emailing A.I.E.Q.
    All day in Real Life

     

    23h34

    Pestering gecko
    Back as little girl alt
    Play as Being rude

     

    2009.12.11.

     

    Pale blue skies white clouds
    Cello playing in my ears
    On the first cold day


     

    2009.12.12.

     

    Papa is crying
    At a cousin's funeral
    He misses maman

     

    Where are the dead gone?
    The Guadalupe Virgin
    Still smiles in her room

     

    2009.12.14.

     

    Outside at midnight
    The cat threads into the snow
    On her gentle paws

    Purring on your heart
    Nat-cat looks like a lion
    And I love you both


    Taking a shower
    White-lily scent on my hair
    Aware of being

     

    2009.12.15.


    In the silent dawn
    Your warm arm around me
    I fall back to sleep

     

    10h56


    Play as being rushed
    Conscious and self-conscious both
    Icestorm on the brink


    12h00

    Church bells are pealing
    Walking in City of Snow 
    It means it is noon

     

    Repeating the lines
    Logging into memory 
    In step with the count

    12h20

    Subway ride downtown
    Twenty-five minutes to write 
    It is twelve twenty

    Taking a deep breath
    Catching 9 seconds of time
    Voices around chat

     

    12h27

    Loud MP3 on
    Red-haired pierced-nose as neighbour
    My avatar's twin

    12h29

    Hot in winter clothes
    Writing down snippets of me
    Connecting with Self

     

    12h30

    People are looking
    Should let go of fingers counts
    Write bars on paper

    12h34

    Weird pipe sound
    Reminds me of sarin gaz
    Moment of pure fear

    12h36

    Holding breath a while
    As claustrophobia kicks in
    And then fades away

    12h40

    Six minutes to wait
    Missed connecting subway
    Contemplating void

    12h41

    Huge advertisement
    With cute puppies in boxes
    To sell a cell phone

    12h45

    Poet's luck I guess
    As I get to sit again
    On the ride to Peel

     

    Would like to capture
    The dancing step we used
    To both sit graciously

     

    The reading lady
    Absorbed in her book and I
    As we board the car

     

    around 4h30

    Baked goods, flowers
    Gift wrappings, notebooks
    Loaded, I can't write

     

    My balancing act
    In fast-moving subway
    Fills with 9 seconds



    2009.12.15.

    00h39

     

    As I'm typing this 
    I gasp: I left the flowers
    On the letterbox

    Minus zero C
    Guess I'll have frozen roses
    For breakfast, and tea

     

    2009.12.16.

    07h40 (moment of typing the haiku)

    With loving kindness
    Zen broke the ice and we talked
    Pushing through silence

     

    2009.12.21.

    08h30

    On the in-breath wave
    I'm connecting with the flow
    And flowing with it

     

    2009.12.25.

    23h58

    Cooking welcoming
    Play as being Christmas
    Giving receiving

     

    2009.12.30.

    Play as partying
    A Psychic City of friends
    Flying a carpet

    2010.01.02.

    On Palindrome Day
    Exhausted and yet happy
    Then suddenly sad

     

    2010.01.03.

    12h40 

    A sync flock of birds
    Flying back home in a V
    Guardians of love

     

    2010.01.06.

    Avatar Seeing
    Technology, art and soul
    A lovely story

     

    Did try a few nines
    During the movie, stopping
    9 seconds's too long!

    Did enjoy myself
    Great Time is said elastic
    Vibrant and alive

    I see you she says
    I see you he says too
    They see through seeing


     


     

     

     

     

     


     


     

     



     


     

     


     

     

     


     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     


     

     

     



     

     

     

     


     

     

     


     

     


     

     


     



     

     

     

     

     










































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